Write on how you perceive other forum members

[Rationalist]

Mehrbod, this topic is interesting, but not in English! Because conversation around that in Persian is more intimately than English

However just as an exercise for English is fine

[Mehrbod]

Mehrbod, this topic is interesting, but not in English! Because conversation around that in Persian is more intimately than English
How ever just as a exercise for English is fine

agreed.

and yeah, that's the primary point of the thread, to exercise English. As you have to really try hard to explain something or someone else in another language.

also since you're here, how about you start the thread? I guess you've had enough time to get to know other members by now

[Rationalist]

how about you start the thread? I guess you've had enough time to get to know other members by now

All right! I write about whom that I know him more than the others. So, please debug my writing on any aspects carefully! Also it is clear that this writing is unformal and for exercise only.


So my target is you:
Mehrbod; the person who which is diligent,playful, and hooked* on this forum!
He has a good Social relationships and he has respected by the others. Mehrbod learns us the words of Persian language in his every posts, which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his scientific personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing now.
Based on wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and often he is online; so I'm gazing for him about his pay attention to more important works in his life!
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* its an unformal term: a person who pay to something exorbitancy.

[Ouroboros]

He has a good Social relationships and he has respected by the others. Mehrbod learns us the words of Persian language in his every posts, which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his scientific personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing now.
Based on wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and often he is online; so I'm gazing for him about his pay attention to more important works in his life!

With respect, I made some corrections: 1. He has good social relationships(or better yet: he has good social skills). 2. "He has the respect of others". 3. Mehrbod "Teaches" us...

4. I actually couldn't understand what you mean by your last sentence.

[Mehrbod]

With respect, I made some corrections: 1. He has good social relationships(or better yet: he has good social skills). 2. "He has the respect of others". 3. Mehrbod "Teaches" us...

4. I actually couldn't understand what you mean by your last sentence.

Now go on Amir, give us some perception! :)

How do you see other members?

[Mehrbod]

All right! I write about whom that I know him more than the others. So, please debug my writing on any aspects carefully! Also it is clear that this writing is unformal and for exercise only.


So my target is you:
Mehrbod; the person who which is diligent,playful, and hooked* on this forum!
He has a good Social relationships and he has respected by the others. Mehrbod learns us the words of Persian language in his every posts, which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his scientific personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing now.
Based on wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and often he is online; so I'm gazing for him about his pay attention to more important works in his life!
__________________________________________
* its an unformal term: a person who pay to something exorbitancy.

Hey Rationalism, thanks for the analysis :)

Firstly I'll go ahead and correct some of your grammar:

All right! I write about whom that I know him more than the others. So, please debug my writing on any all aspects carefully! Also it is clear that this writing is informal and for exercise only.


So my target is you:
Mehrbod; the person who which is diligent,playful, and hooked* on this forum!
He has a good Social relationships and he has respected by the others earned the respect of others. Mehrbod learns teaches us the words of Persian language in his every posts, which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his scientific science-oriented personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing now so far.

Based on what I wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and often he is often online; so I'm gazing looking for him about his pay attention wishing he would pay attention to more important works in his life!
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* it's an informal term: a person who pays attention to something exorbitancy exorbitantly.

I also much appreciate what you said about my personality and also using my time more wisely. However on that, I don't believe in hard work or anything remotely alike, I rather like doing 'nothing' most of the time, followed by short bursts of real hard work.
Over the years I've come to believe that it's how we've been evolved to live & work as human beings, other approaches (i.e. working hard) won't work in the long-run.

[Rationalist]

any all aspects

Are you sure using of "any" is incorrect?I meant "all" and I think we can use each one optional

he has been writing now so far.

?and here I used "Present Perfect Continuous" . Is incorrect to use "now" for end of that sentence


at all,it seems my English writing is poor rather than you and Amir
I should practice more; Because this is embarrassing for me

[Mehrbod]

Are you sure using of "any" is incorrect?I meant "all" and I think we can use each one optional




?and here I used "Present Perfect Continuous" . Is incorrect to use "now" for end of that sentence


at all,it seems my English writing is poor rather than you and Amir
I should practice more; Because this is embarrassing for me

I have absolutely no idea what you mean by Present Perfect Continuous, but these two differ in meaning:

تاکنون = so far
اکنون = now



And about that "any/all", it's also similar to Persian:

any = هر
all = همه


You could say:

any book, is a good book to read
هر ماتیکانی، یک ماتیکان خوبه برای خواندن



But you can't substitute "any" with "all" in there.


And last thing you need to do is to be embarrassed.
You're doing a rather good job in my opinion, just keep using English (esp. in thinking) and you'll master it before you know.